http://silverbelle1220.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] silverbelle1220.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silverbellelj 2010-09-16 02:51 pm (UTC)

Yes, poor Lizzie. I was going for Jane being dissapointed in Lizzie, but I don't think it came across that way. I had thought of a sunburn instead of tan, but tan fit better with what I wrote in the last chapter.

Thanks!

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