http://biglenny.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] biglenny.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] silverbellelj 2014-06-08 11:45 am (UTC)

Doug as an evil warlock cracked me up, that is all. XD

Anyway, one thing I like that you've mentioned here is asking yourself questions about the events on Gen 9 regarding its impact on Desi, or that's what I think. It makes for interesting storytelling on her part and how she gets her own happy ending, which really works well for the story as a whole.

Ah, a name's etymology is always a significant part of a character and anything that revolves around him or he, doesn't it? Makes for interesting ways to show important aspects of one's life, and I love the girls' names for that reason.

You've said a lot of good points in this BTS and I'm impressed to hear about it all. Good job!

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