Scribble, scribble, scribble

I've been busy writing over the past few days.  So far, I have 8 of the 14 scenes I wanted to prewrite done (yay!) and two of them I can't fully write until I've played som (James and Cindy's wedding and honeymoon - squee!).  I'm hoping to get the writing finished today or early tomorrow, so I can get to filming shortly after.  I'm excited to get this chapter out, as I have plans for this generations.  Plans, I tell you!

Behind the cut is a spoiler -  the scene when James brings Cindy home to introduce her to his parents.  Feedback is welcome.
( "You have nothing to worry about." )