Loved this chapter. It was filled with emotion and you did it all so well. I felt like I was riding the ups and downs right along with the family.
I like how you touched on some of the more horrific parts of the war. They were important enough that they had to be mentioned, but they would have been really, really difficult to set up and film.
I'm so glad that Nick survived! It was so hard to guess from the other (cryptic) drabbles you've done whether he was going to make it or not. Steven is adorable too.
I read it late last night - just before bed - and it made such an impression that it got incorporated into my dreams!
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on 2013-05-03 10:14 pm (UTC)I like how you touched on some of the more horrific parts of the war. They were important enough that they had to be mentioned, but they would have been really, really difficult to set up and film.
I'm so glad that Nick survived! It was so hard to guess from the other (cryptic) drabbles you've done whether he was going to make it or not. Steven is adorable too.
I read it late last night - just before bed - and it made such an impression that it got incorporated into my dreams!