Loved your update! I agree with all the comments above. I'll try not to repeat all of them. :) So glad Nick survived, I was really worried! You're right when you say that it would be a really great point of view to write from. But I like Nick and Alice just too much to have wanted him to die.(And secretly I'm very happy he didn't die in the 'simdennes', I would have probably wanted to pack my bags and move to another country.)
I really enjoyed the medical part. The moment when Nick's patient dies was really moving, you captured Nick's emotions beautifully.
I'm also glad Danny is still alive, loved the bickering between him and Nick about who had to salute who.
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on 2013-05-05 01:39 pm (UTC)Loved your update! I agree with all the comments above. I'll try not to repeat all of them. :)
So glad Nick survived, I was really worried! You're right when you say that it would be a really great point of view to write from. But I like Nick and Alice just too much to have wanted him to die.(And secretly I'm very happy he didn't die in the 'simdennes', I would have probably wanted to pack my bags and move to another country.)
I really enjoyed the medical part. The moment when Nick's patient dies was really moving, you captured Nick's emotions beautifully.
I'm also glad Danny is still alive, loved the bickering between him and Nick about who had to salute who.
Steve is just too cute!