Sim Scenes Prompt - Beach / Disapointment / Family

[silverbellelj]

I've never tried one of these before, but this prompt spoke to me.
























I hope you enjoyed, and that my little story made sense.

Comments

[rosefyre.livejournal.com]

Awww, poor Lizzie.

It did make sense to me, but I'm not sure it would have if someone didn't know your sims. Not sure how you could do that unless there were a way to make her look even more tan, though.

Still, great for a first time person!

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Yes, poor Lizzie. I was going for Jane being dissapointed in Lizzie, but I don't think it came across that way. I had thought of a sunburn instead of tan, but tan fit better with what I wrote in the last chapter.

Thanks!