Sim Scenes Prompt - Beach / Disapointment / Family

[silverbellelj]

I've never tried one of these before, but this prompt spoke to me.
























I hope you enjoyed, and that my little story made sense.

Comments

[rosefyre.livejournal.com]

Awww, poor Lizzie.

It did make sense to me, but I'm not sure it would have if someone didn't know your sims. Not sure how you could do that unless there were a way to make her look even more tan, though.

Still, great for a first time person!

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Yes, poor Lizzie. I was going for Jane being dissapointed in Lizzie, but I don't think it came across that way. I had thought of a sunburn instead of tan, but tan fit better with what I wrote in the last chapter.

Thanks!

[joandsarah.livejournal.com]

Makes perfect sense to me as I know the characters. Jan has scolded Lizzy harshly for getting an 'unlady like' suntan.

P.S I love those swimming suits.

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

We have a winner! I've always wanted to try this, but never had a prompt speak to me like that.

The swimsuits are all from All About Style. I love them too, and since I don't think I'll be sending my Sims to the beach in the main story, it was a nice way to show them off.

[cinthiaxemery.livejournal.com]

As a person who has only read a couple chapters of your legacy so far I'd like to say that I understood this even without knowing these sims yet. You did a great job.

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I hoped that this would appeal to a larger audience.

[remisims.livejournal.com]

I assumed that maybe tans were more or less frowned upon. I thought it made sense. :)

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Having never done this before (but seeing the amazing creations others have come up with) I was nervous.

[ndainye.livejournal.com]

I'm not familiar with the family but I think it's understandable. Thanks for doing this!

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I had fun shooting it, and will probably try another prompt, when I have one that speaks to me.

[maranazar.livejournal.com]

Oooh, I see. With no concept of your story or your characters, I had no idea, but now that I know, I really like the direction you took this! Awesome. =)

[silverbelle1220.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.