on 2016-04-30 03:54 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] rosefyre.livejournal.com
Woot!

Story = definitely more important than staging.

Poor Steven, trying to live up to all the expectations - the worst of which come from his own self! I think he puts more pressure on himself than anyone else ever would, to be completely honest.

Ah, gender issues. Well, Nettie's young enough that she might get more of the equality than the older ones will. We'll have to see!

...That is a terrible reason to have a baby. I foresee disaster here because, seriously, no. Neither of them want this kid. Poor sprog, it is not going to grow up in a happy home.

Yay impending marriage! Is Mary a dormie we know or one you created or randomized? Aha, just got to the end - very nice.

Twins? Oy. Well, I guess you got Rosalie the ten kids want!

Shirley WOULD get a girly girl, wouldn't she? *amused*

Very nice chapter, can't wait to see where you take the next couple of generations!

on 2016-05-02 07:06 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] leilia.livejournal.com
Very nice! It's nice to see this story back!

on 2016-05-07 07:37 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] penguingirl03.livejournal.com
Yay new chapter! Glad to see that Steven has someone who can make him come out of his shell! I was getting worried that would never happen.

I really don't think having another set of twins was a great idea for Bruce and Rosalie but I'm sure it fulfilled that 10 kids want. :)

I like Peggy and Doug together. I hope that she can convince him to stay. It's nice to see Alice helping out whenever she can as well.

I'm glad that Dotty gets to continue to travel. I wish her story had gone differently but it seems like she is happy anyway.

Looking forward to see where generation 9 is headed!

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